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A very young boy
And an even younger girl
Saw each other one day
As innocent as pearls

The boy gave her candy
She gave him a kiss
And from that day
They've been best friends  

The boy and girl grow
as many years pass
And soon thier friendship
Turns into romance

They're happy together
Never telling lies
She says that she'll love him
Till the day that she dies

As more years go by
Thier highschool life begins
They still love each other
But thier relationship thins

They are the 'it' couple
admired by all
but somethings troubling the boy
As he walks down the hall

She decides to Surprise him
By seeing him outdoor
But to her shock and horror
He's out with some whore

She has to confront him
Dumbfounded with shock
When the boy sees her gaze
thier eyes could not lock

She demands for a reason
He says he want's a break up
She walks away in pain
tears ruining her make up

She runs into her kitchen
Grabbing a large knife
Thinking deep in her soul
Theres no reason for her life

She scribbled a note
And left it on the door
Then brought the knife to her heart
And fell dead on the floor

The boy came to see her
Saw the note on the door
Tears came to his eyes
Because her life was no more

Her note:
"I want you to know
That you made me cry
But i still loved you
Till the day that i died
©2008-2009 ~ihatelife1029
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:icononly-hurts-me-more13:
i really love this one cuz i sometimes fear this stuff happening to me...

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*The Only One Who Can Dry My Tears
Is The One Making Them Fall*
:iconihatelife1029:
Have you talked to him about things like this.. ????

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I am I
and You are You
I do my thing
and You do yours,
and in the end,
if we are together,
then it is beautiful.

Valerie


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:icononly-hurts-me-more13:
no....i don't want to make anything aquard and he doesn't know i'm kind of suicidal...i really don't want to tell him cuz i don't want him to worry about me...not that he does....i don't know

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*The Only One Who Can Dry My Tears
Is The One Making Them Fall*
:iconmickeychan45:
I think i'm gonna cry :cry: Thats so sweet!
:iconihatelife1029:
well, like, maybe he should know...?
Maybe... It would make you closer?

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I am I
and You are You
I do my thing
and You do yours,
and in the end,
if we are together,
then it is beautiful.

Valerie


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:iconihatelife1029:
Awe.
Thanks.

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I am I
and You are You
I do my thing
and You do yours,
and in the end,
if we are together,
then it is beautiful.

Valerie


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:iconhyperactiveprower:
AWWW!

This is really cute and sad at the same time...I like how at the beginning she said she'd love him till the day she died, and at the end, she really did.

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:iconihatelife1029:
thanks.


and thanks for the fav

--
I am I
and You are You
I do my thing
and You do yours,
and in the end,
if we are together,
then it is beautiful.

Valerie


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:icononly-hurts-me-more13:
maybe....don't know...will think about it tonight....

--
*The Only One Who Can Dry My Tears
Is The One Making Them Fall*

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